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Monday, August 11, 2008

"The last time I saw my father..."

Whenever our nearly-weekly group Women Writers gathers, we begin with a writing prompt. A priority for us is time for writing! The most recent prompt was

    "The last time I saw my father..."
--a very powerful prompt indeed. Here is what I wrote in reply:
    "10 August 2008 - The last time I saw my father was Sunday, November 28, 19999, in the afternoon Pacific Time. He died, which means he passed from a shell to a sea until another shell passed his way. His picture sits on my dresser. There he stands on a boulder lodged in a river with rapids. He smiles wearing a shirt with a grizzly bear. The bear looks up as its jaws open wide, rows of teeth displayed. Bear was one of Dad's totems, as was Eagle with out-stretched talons. Dad speaks to me through Elvis songs on the radio, and he is with me more than I know."

    Copyright 2008, Melissa Dey Hasbrook.

Posted by Melissa Dey Hasbrook at 4:17 AM    

2 comments:

marycela said...

Melissa,sometimes them, speak to as in fiferent ways.
he has chouse Elvis songs.
Play an Elvis song softlly and tolk to your dad. Say the things you did not say. I tolk to my father, but we do not have a song nor a place.
hughs
Marycela A Valos

August 11, 2008 at 10:13 AM
Regina Holliday said...

Beautiful piece Melissa. I am so glad you share your writing with all of us.

January 1, 2010 at 10:56 PM

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In March 2008, The Women Writers Blog became an online space for a collective who hones our art and craft together.

Originally, Melissa Dey Hasbrook created the WW Blog (Jan.07) to promote collaborations with poets Deena Tyler and Marycela. Later, MDH continued its use for preventing violence against women (Aug.07).

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